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Tuesday, February 22, 2005

La Devil...poetry et al

Warning: The post below is to get back at all the pain and misery caused to the author by the person concerned. Any resemblance to any person living is the readers misfortune and no f!@#*$ coincidence

Recently La Devil has been showing signs of interest in stuff. Which would have been perfectly normal if they were normal stuff. However if something is wrong with her, i leave it to you to decide...

Here are her humble and beginner's attempts at shayris. At 2 in da nite no less. Some are pathetic and some are disgusting. And some are downright funny. But all are in hindi. So everyone is duly warned.
People are welcome to complete some of her verses...So here goes

"zindagi kya hai .......intezaar hi toh........gham ki somthin somthin......aur maut somthin somthin"

"sharbati naino ke jheeel mein doob jaane ko ji chahta
tumhare aane se mere zindagi mein somthin somthin hota hai
dil ki kashti kinara dhundhti hai.....
tere aankhon se koi nazara dhundhti hai..."

"dil ke tukde jaise zameen par bikhar gaye.....
tum conversation chod ke jaise yuhi nikal gaye" (this 1 was circumstantial...ask her why...)

"jhonka hawa ka yun chookar nikal jaaye.....jaise tum online aakar offline chala jaaye"

"logon kahan so jaao.....magar humne intezaar kiya.....dil ke armaano ko palko pe bithaliya"
Purv:U want more of my shayarana andaaz (she askin me)
Me: Oh shoot anyway *muhahahaha*

undetered she goes on...
"shayri kagaz kalam pe nahi likhi jaati......pyar karnewalon ki takdeer nahi badli jaati"

"gham dene walen hazzaaar mil jaate hai.......saath dene wala ek hi hota hai"

"maine kaha chand lakar do....to unhone kahan aaina dekhlo"

"logon ki nazren bachate aai hoon tumse milne.....ab tumhi se nazren chura rahi hoon"

"palkey uthi toh tumhare chehre ka deedar hua.......dil tumhara hi hakdaar hua (this is da saddest she admits)"

"pyaar mein logon ki neend udjaati hai......hum to sote hai unke sapne dekhne"

all the while....we r laughing our butts off and in the span of 30 minutes.


  • At February 23, 2005 7:47 PM, Blogger Prashant said…

    jagjit sahab ko bhej deejiye.. pata chale ek hit ghazal hi ban gayi :)... waise kabhi mushayra kiya toh humein bulana nahin bhuliyega :)...

    damn, it took so much effort to write that... my hindi has been damaged beyond repair :(

  • At February 23, 2005 9:07 PM, Blogger J said…

    rofl stuff. u guys having fun eh? hehe... u know when all this sher-o-shaayari happens? :-p

  • At February 23, 2005 9:28 PM, Blogger Geetanjali said…


    *gaps clutching her tummy* Vindictive while getting revenge and simlutaneously providing comic releif to the Bloggizens of the world - you sure make a rocking package! ;-)

    So is La Devil out for yor blood yet, or is she glorying in her new found fame? :-D

  • At February 23, 2005 10:08 PM, Blogger Mistress of Magic said…

    poor u... last one was good... new post up btw... :))

  • At February 23, 2005 10:57 PM, Blogger manuscrypts said…

    going by history, for a shayar to be really popular, he/she has to be dead.... wanna do something about it?? ;)

  • At February 24, 2005 4:30 AM, Blogger Elixir said…

    Prashant: hehe it wasnt a bad effort if i mite say so.
    N mushayra? r u sure? things kinda go bezerk when purv tries 2 make shayris.... *wink*

    J: fun??!!!??*sigh* it aint fun when da shaayri is inspired by sum guy I like!!!!
    DO tell purv when all this sher o shaayri happens...*shudders*

  • At February 24, 2005 4:34 AM, Blogger Elixir said…

    Geetu: hehe am i too good or am i good!!!
    *wink and grin*

    Mistress: k will check it out

    Manuscrypts: hmm...now that u mention it, i sure want my BEST frd to be popular. u got any more suggestions how?? *evil grin*


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