Wishlist : I Need...
I need pain to know I am not numb yet.
I need people to know I am not alone yet
I need colours to know im not blind yet
I need love to know im there yet.
I need rain to know I am cleansed
I need sun to know there exists tomorrow.
I need wind to caress my face,
And the surety of permanence.
I need my own prince charming,
I need impish eared elves,
I need a tower in the exotic lands I dream of
I need a glass slipper to believe yet.
I need that little brook
Where I talk to my butterfly,
And see that there is depth,
But seems so shallow yet.
I need the world at my feet,
Just so that I can tiptoe and say im sensitive
But when my chest fills with arrogance
I need that pinch of the stray thorn.
I need expressions like a lifeline,
I need words to come to my defence,
I need beautifully strung lines,
And I need the meaning to creep in yet.
I need enchantment to know I am not jaded yet
I need impulse to create magic.
I need wonder and shining eyes,
I need to know I can cause that.
I need the memory of a frozen moment,
And the eternity it wraps,
I need faith to survive
I need love to live yet.
I need people to know I am not alone yet
I need colours to know im not blind yet
I need love to know im there yet.
I need rain to know I am cleansed
I need sun to know there exists tomorrow.
I need wind to caress my face,
And the surety of permanence.
I need my own prince charming,
I need impish eared elves,
I need a tower in the exotic lands I dream of
I need a glass slipper to believe yet.
I need that little brook
Where I talk to my butterfly,
And see that there is depth,
But seems so shallow yet.
I need the world at my feet,
Just so that I can tiptoe and say im sensitive
But when my chest fills with arrogance
I need that pinch of the stray thorn.
I need expressions like a lifeline,
I need words to come to my defence,
I need beautifully strung lines,
And I need the meaning to creep in yet.
I need enchantment to know I am not jaded yet
I need impulse to create magic.
I need wonder and shining eyes,
I need to know I can cause that.
I need the memory of a frozen moment,
And the eternity it wraps,
I need faith to survive
I need love to live yet.
posted by Elixir @ 11:34 AM
35 Comments:
At March 24, 2005 11:56 AM,
SURECMAN said…
That is a cool poem!
At March 24, 2005 2:34 PM,
Anonymous said…
You need therapy. Soon.
what name shall I use this time!
At March 24, 2005 6:45 PM,
The God Of Tall Things said…
Hey Shipra, that was really good ... and no, i'm not being sarcastic or anything.
@Anonymous: f**k off, she's perfectly fine...
At March 25, 2005 1:50 AM,
la devil said…
wow. awesome amazing. beautiful. brilliant piece of work.
can't help it ship. when i read somethin nice n i realy realy like it...can think of only these words:P
forgiv me for my poor vocabulary but i really luved ur poem :)
hav alredy linkd u :P
At March 25, 2005 1:54 AM,
la devil said…
anan i see u makin up for the mess u created :P :P ******* :P:P
At March 25, 2005 5:19 AM,
Elixir said…
boomba: lol @ur id. and thank u, thank u *regal bow*. thou donth blog??
Anon: hehehehe yeah i guess.
wat name or should i guess or mayb u cud leave a hint n i cud guess *excited*
At March 25, 2005 5:48 AM,
Elixir said…
Anan/GoTT: coming frm u, its high praise. Thank u :)
n bout anon, rembr u too think da same when u dont get my writings :P
u cant blame da poor soul for thinking i need theapy
At March 25, 2005 5:48 AM,
erratica said…
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At March 25, 2005 5:49 AM,
erratica said…
its beautiful........so very beautiful..awesome.. amazing.....rocks! i m as vocab challenged as purv but i used my trademark word rocks;)
its sooooo cool. luvd it. *a big hug* wow!
lol @ boomba's id.
At March 25, 2005 6:05 AM,
Elixir said…
*sniff sniff, louuuddd sniffle* u make my heart melt!!!
and ahem...in case u r vocab challenged, i dont mind givin u sum sentences and adjectives u cud use as comment :P that way...ull kno how 2 praise :P:P
At March 25, 2005 8:30 AM,
Anonymous said…
guessing is boring.
how do you get so many people to post comments on ur blog?
this name that i never use.
At March 26, 2005 6:01 AM,
Phal said…
i like. very nice. clap clap clap
*kicks anonymous*
At March 26, 2005 8:46 PM,
Mistress of Magic said…
amazing piece.. i think u read my mind again.. do all gsbs go thtu same pangs of emotions at the same time? hehe... anyways happy easter :)
At March 26, 2005 8:46 PM,
Mistress of Magic said…
new post up :)
At March 26, 2005 9:41 PM,
succubus said…
ah hah... so here is where all the self love is... looking for it all weekend
At March 27, 2005 9:22 AM,
Elixir said…
Mistress: hey babe, howas mlore?? yeah sumtimes it does happen...ppl outside r feeling da same as ur!!
n wil check out da site asap.tired aaj.
Succubus: *grin* yep. howas ur weekend??
At March 27, 2005 9:29 AM,
Elixir said…
Anon: y u cynical sarcastic ol hog... i get ppl 2 comment da same way u have commentd...and they r jus not being all nasty n drab and jaded :P
Phal: thank u n kicking anon...dont da!! me feeling sorry 4 da soul *nope m not!!!*
At March 27, 2005 1:04 PM,
Anonymous said…
damn i cant think of anything to say.
cant think of a name either
At March 27, 2005 1:07 PM,
Anonymous said…
who the hell is this anonymous guy. he always robs me of my killer lines.
Names are a pain
At March 27, 2005 11:11 PM,
Anonymous said…
hey you forgot something
..
you need a hug...and icecream...and chocolate.. and junk food too!and late night movies with sleepovers and smooshy pillows!!
-grafx
At March 28, 2005 2:53 AM,
manuscrypts said…
.. i need prose posts to comment.. ;)
At March 28, 2005 4:09 AM,
Anonymous said…
now i know.. maybe I need a muse. Or a shrink, or just some plain old heartburn.
then i had Name
Now i have game
(monopoly roxxx)
At March 28, 2005 4:41 AM,
Elixir said…
Anon 1/2??!!?? lol yeah i think a shrink wud b a good idea, n a heartburn wud make u a lil more accepting too :P
Grafxgurl:*smiles* yes.
Manuscrypts: hehe. yeah me thinks me good at prose too :P
At March 28, 2005 4:50 AM,
. : A : . said…
Really liked the ending,
"I need the memory of a frozen moment,
And the eternity it wraps,
I need faith to survive
I need love to live yet."
At March 28, 2005 11:12 PM,
Geetanjali said…
I seem to be commenting rather late but "better late than never" - I really liked this rant of yours. Unlike most rants, it is not raw in emotion yet emotes very well! Nice! Good writing baccha!
At March 29, 2005 1:10 AM,
Pincushion said…
You made me smile..
you made me think of innocence..
this is nice
I needed to read something like this..theres hope in this world yet..
Cheers!
At March 29, 2005 2:03 AM,
Elixir said…
A, geetz and pincushion :*smiles*
At March 31, 2005 2:55 AM,
J said…
Nice usage of words... i LOVE it! :)
At March 31, 2005 10:25 AM,
SmartOxymoron said…
Thats 8/10 right there. Id give you more, but I dont want to hurt anonymous's feelings. Poor kid.
At March 31, 2005 10:37 AM,
SmartOxymoron said…
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At March 31, 2005 10:38 AM,
SmartOxymoron said…
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At March 31, 2005 10:40 AM,
Elixir said…
J: thank u
Oxymoron: damn anon...10 on 10 is wat i like best *grin*
At March 31, 2005 10:47 AM,
SmartOxymoron said…
Its late girl. Definitely not the right time to be online :P. And hey, sorry for all those mis-comments (connection problems). On the bright side, the comment count's increased considerably ;).
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