I need pain to know I am not numb yet.
I need people to know I am not alone yet
I need colours to know im not blind yet
I need love to know im there yet.
I need rain to know I am cleansed
I need sun to know there exists tomorrow.
I need wind to caress my face,
And the surety of permanence.
I need my own prince charming,
I need impish eared elves,
I need a tower in the exotic lands I dream of
I need a glass slipper to believe yet.
I need that little brook
Where I talk to my butterfly,
And see that there is depth,
But seems so shallow yet.
I need the world at my feet,
Just so that I can tiptoe and say im sensitive
But when my chest fills with arrogance
I need that pinch of the stray thorn.
I need expressions like a lifeline,
I need words to come to my defence,
I need beautifully strung lines,
And I need the meaning to creep in yet.
I need enchantment to know I am not jaded yet
I need impulse to create magic.
I need wonder and shining eyes,
I need to know I can cause that.
I need the memory of a frozen moment,
And the eternity it wraps,
I need faith to survive
I need love to live yet.
You need therapy. Soon.
ReplyDeletewhat name shall I use this time!
Hey Shipra, that was really good ... and no, i'm not being sarcastic or anything.
ReplyDelete@Anonymous: f**k off, she's perfectly fine...
wow. awesome amazing. beautiful. brilliant piece of work.
ReplyDeletecan't help it ship. when i read somethin nice n i realy realy like it...can think of only these words:P
forgiv me for my poor vocabulary but i really luved ur poem :)
hav alredy linkd u :P
anan i see u makin up for the mess u created :P :P ******* :P:P
ReplyDeleteboomba: lol @ur id. and thank u, thank u *regal bow*. thou donth blog??
ReplyDeleteAnon: hehehehe yeah i guess.
wat name or should i guess or mayb u cud leave a hint n i cud guess *excited*
Anan/GoTT: coming frm u, its high praise. Thank u :)
ReplyDeleten bout anon, rembr u too think da same when u dont get my writings :P
u cant blame da poor soul for thinking i need theapy
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ReplyDeleteits beautiful........so very beautiful..awesome.. amazing.....rocks! i m as vocab challenged as purv but i used my trademark word rocks;)
ReplyDeleteits sooooo cool. luvd it. *a big hug* wow!
lol @ boomba's id.
*sniff sniff, louuuddd sniffle* u make my heart melt!!!
ReplyDeleteand ahem...in case u r vocab challenged, i dont mind givin u sum sentences and adjectives u cud use as comment :P that way...ull kno how 2 praise :P:P
guessing is boring.
ReplyDeletehow do you get so many people to post comments on ur blog?
this name that i never use.
i like. very nice. clap clap clap
ReplyDelete*kicks anonymous*
Mistress: hey babe, howas mlore?? yeah sumtimes it does happen...ppl outside r feeling da same as ur!!
ReplyDeleten wil check out da site asap.tired aaj.
Succubus: *grin* yep. howas ur weekend??
Anon: y u cynical sarcastic ol hog... i get ppl 2 comment da same way u have commentd...and they r jus not being all nasty n drab and jaded :P
ReplyDeletePhal: thank u n kicking anon...dont da!! me feeling sorry 4 da soul *nope m not!!!*
damn i cant think of anything to say.
ReplyDeletecant think of a name either
who the hell is this anonymous guy. he always robs me of my killer lines.
ReplyDeleteNames are a pain
hey you forgot something
ReplyDelete..
you need a hug...and icecream...and chocolate.. and junk food too!and late night movies with sleepovers and smooshy pillows!!
-grafx
.. i need prose posts to comment.. ;)
ReplyDeletenow i know.. maybe I need a muse. Or a shrink, or just some plain old heartburn.
ReplyDeletethen i had Name
Now i have game
(monopoly roxxx)
Anon 1/2??!!?? lol yeah i think a shrink wud b a good idea, n a heartburn wud make u a lil more accepting too :P
ReplyDeleteGrafxgurl:*smiles* yes.
Manuscrypts: hehe. yeah me thinks me good at prose too :P
Really liked the ending,
ReplyDelete"I need the memory of a frozen moment,
And the eternity it wraps,
I need faith to survive
I need love to live yet."
I seem to be commenting rather late but "better late than never" - I really liked this rant of yours. Unlike most rants, it is not raw in emotion yet emotes very well! Nice! Good writing baccha!
ReplyDeleteYou made me smile..
ReplyDeleteyou made me think of innocence..
this is nice
I needed to read something like this..theres hope in this world yet..
Cheers!
A, geetz and pincushion :*smiles*
ReplyDeleteNice usage of words... i LOVE it! :)
ReplyDeleteThats 8/10 right there. Id give you more, but I dont want to hurt anonymous's feelings. Poor kid.
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ReplyDeleteJ: thank u
ReplyDeleteOxymoron: damn anon...10 on 10 is wat i like best *grin*
Its late girl. Definitely not the right time to be online :P. And hey, sorry for all those mis-comments (connection problems). On the bright side, the comment count's increased considerably ;).
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